以下这段话，哪种英文表达比较好？求童鞋们指点。。。

M44

我家门前有一棵树，它已经枯萎了，我觉得很危险，随时会倒下，对我的安全造成影响。希望你们能够派人来把这棵树砍掉。


There is a tree in front of my house, it has died, I felt that is very dangerous, I will fall down at any time, to impact the safety. I hope you will be able to send someone to cut the tree down

dear XXX:

There is a withered tree in front of my house and me and the neighbors think it would fall anytime which risks the people walking pass, We wish the department could send someone to deal with it.

我家旁边没有邻居。。。就我独户

M44 发表于 2012-2-11 23:02
我家旁边没有邻居。。。就我独户

那就改，me and my family